and do you know what?
I was actually pretty good.
The vocabulary was nice and rich
and it scanned well too.
It was funny, and interesting
and it made me want to read further.
It contained a good mix
of similes, metaphors
and others kinds of figurative language.
It was fluent and slick
and I was sure
that if I put it in a book
the readers would enjoy it.
It was, in other words,
a highly serviceable poem.
Then I deleted it
and wrote this.
Joshua Seigal
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