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Wednesday 12 October 2022

Adverb Poems from Year 5, Aberdour School

Here is an interesting idea for a poetry workshop. Ask each student to write down an activity that they enjoy doing. Next, ask them to write down a list of adverbs associated with that activity. They could be as wacky and imaginative as they like. Finally, each student can use their adverbs as the starters for each line in their poem. You can model this first, encouraging poetic and imaginative language. Here are some lovely examples, written by Year 5 pupils during my recent visit to Aberdour School, Surrey. Check em out!

How To Ride a Horse by Brooke


Bravely,

Jumping higher than I have ever jumped before


Quickly,

Speeding around as fast as I can 


Elegantly,

Trotting around the woods going nice and slow 


Happily,

Walking around to finish the ride 


Badly,

Falling off after refusing to do a jump


Sadly,

Being eliminated from a big competition


Crazily,

Standing up on the horse’s saddle 



How To Do Gymnastics by Fay 


Gracefully,

Flipping and tumbling across the floor 


Excitedly, 

Letting the adrenaline whoosh over you 


Joyfully, 

Dancing across the floor witha wide grin on your face 



How To Dance by Isabelle


Gracefully, I dance like a beautiful swan on the lake 

Angrily, stomping around when you are meant to be light on your feet

Stupidly, messing about when everyone else is doing the right thing 

Sadly, hurting your head when you are in a competition

Happily, doing the right thing and smiling 



What It’s Like To Sketch name omitted


Carefully, 

With gentle movements

of the pencil 


Calmly, 

Forgetting about all worries

and everything around you


Happily, 

Shaping the fragments of the picture,

bringing everything together 


Judgefully, 

Correcting the mistakes 



How To Annoy Your Little Brother by Lia 


Slyly, carefully making sure 

No one can see

The horrid trick you’re playing


Happily, tickling him

Until his tummy

Is sore 


Loudly and mischievously, 

Helping everyone

To release the tension