Lovely letter and poems from Valley Primary School, Solihull

I recently ran an online poetry workshop attended by many schools at once. The Literacy Lead from Valley Primary in Solihull got in touch with a thank you letter (I love it when this happens) as well as some of the fantastic poems produced by her pupils. I am delighted to be able to share both the letter and the poems. Here you go:

My class, and other teachers tell me theirs too,  had a fantastic time listening to your poems and meeting your lovely cat.  I have been inundated with poems written during the workshop and promised I would send a couple across.  

Strawberry Dreams (y6 pupil)

Oh Strawberry, I love you so,

Your fruity, fiery self dances in my soul

You feel light and fresh on my tongue 

The light airy sensation you give flies through my lungs

Oh Strawberry, I love you so . 

Pear Love Letter (y6 pupil)

Oh pear

I am going to love you til the very end

you taste like a cloud of heaven 

I'm going to love you til the end 

you are as green as grass on a sunny day 

as smooth as the ocean when it is calm 

so please reply

I will love you til the end  

I love your watermelon ways  (y5 pupil)

Oh watermelon

aren't you lovely?

you are red and green

just like Christmas

you taste like heaven 

oh watermelon

aren't you lovely?

you're crunchy 

and munchy

you keep your seeds hidden within 

your soft, red, juicy insides

Oh watermelon

I love you so 

...

In addition to this, children have been bringing me poems all week, where they have been inspired to just write.  I think you talking about the freedom of no rules and writing about what they love has given them the confidence to have a go, and it has been a joy to sit back and watch it happen. 

My School  (Y3 pupil)

My school is cool and nice

it is the opposite of boring

it's just the best school

it is so fun

super coooool

you should go to it

my school is Valley 

Our sleepover 

friends, friends all gather round 

we better go get something

don't make a sound

we're going to have a midnight feast 

but lets get something healthy

at least 

this is going to be 

the best night ever 

our parents are never

going to find out 

do you see those chicken nuggets and chips?

they're making me want to lick my lips

now quick, lets creep back to my room 

before it gets dark and 

we can't see through the gloom 

So, once again, thank you for all that you do to inspire the reading and writing of poetry.  There are many grateful teachers in my school who are now buzzing with ideas off the back of what you have started.

Have a wonderful weekend,

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