Monday, 30 April 2018
FANTASTIC POEM BY YEAR 7 STUDENT
I'd like to share the following fantastic poem, written by a student a Aberdour School during my recent visit. I love the descriptive language and repetition in this poem. Well done!
My Brother by Josh
Red is my brother.
He’s always fuming about something.
He’s always angry.
He blames other people for things that he does.
He’s always mad at someone, especially me.
Blue is my brother.
He’s always sad.
He’s like a wave crashing ferociously against the rocks.
But he’s sometimes quite calm,
He always tries to act cool.
His heart is always as wide as the sky.
Yellow is my brother.
He’s sometimes happy.
He sometimes looks as bright as the stars.
He’s sometimes as wild as a lion.
He’s sometimes a spring morning.
He sometimes stings like a bee.
I’ll always love him
No matter how mad he gets at me.